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Snoink critiques sugarxsnow's story, "The Sun's Frozen Tears." Read original story on YWS at http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic47927.html

]]> critiquesreviewssnoinkstoriessugarxsnowwritingyoung writersyws http://revver.com/video/1651519/critique-2-of-the-suns-frozen-tears/ http://revver.com/watch/1651519 Critique #2 of "The Sun's Frozen Tears" Snoink critiques sugarxsnow's story, "The Sun's Frozen Tears." Read original story on YWS at http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic47927.html Snoink critiques sugarxsnow's story, "The Sun's Frozen Tears." Read original story on YWS at http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic47927.html Thanks to sugarxsnow! Thanks to sugarxsnow! critiques reviews snoink stories sugarxsnow writing young writers yws nonadult http://creativecommons.org/licenses/by-nc-nd/2.5/ Critique #1 of "The Sun's Frozen Tears" Wed, 13 May 2009 11:52:47 -0800

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Snoink critiques sugarxsnow's story, "The Sun's Frozen Tears." Read the full story on YWS here: http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic47927.html

]]> critiquesdeathsnoinkstoriessugarxsnowwritingyoung writersyws http://revver.com/video/1651444/critique-1-of-the-suns-frozen-tears/ http://revver.com/watch/1651444 Critique #1 of "The Sun's Frozen Tears" Snoink critiques sugarxsnow's story, "The Sun's Frozen Tears." Read the full story on YWS here: http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic47927.html Snoink critiques sugarxsnow's story, "The Sun's Frozen Tears." Read the full story on YWS here: http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic47927.html Thanks to sugarxsnow and YWS! Thanks to sugarxsnow and YWS! critiques death snoink stories sugarxsnow writing young writers yws nonadult http://creativecommons.org/licenses/by-nc-nd/2.5/ Ad #13 YWS Radio Wed, 08 Apr 2009 17:52:57 -0800

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Snoink and Grif.

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Snoink and Grif.

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Snoink and Grif.

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Snoink and Grif.

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Snoink and Grif.

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Snoink and Grif.

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Snoink and Grif.

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Snoink and Grif.

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Snoink and Grif.

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Snoink and Grif

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Snoink and Grif

]]> adblogblogtalkradiogrifsnoinktalk radioyoung writersyws http://revver.com/video/1576847/ad-12-yws-radio/ http://revver.com/watch/1576847 Ad #12 YWS Radio Snoink and Grif Snoink and Grif Thanks to YWS! Thanks to YWS! ad blog blogtalkradio grif snoink talk radio young writers yws nonadult http://creativecommons.org/licenses/by-nc-nd/2.5/ Ad #12 YWS Radio Mon, 06 Apr 2009 20:35:17 -0800

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Snoink and Grif

]]> adblogblogtalkradiogrifsnoinktalk radioyoung writersyws http://revver.com/video/1576853/ad-12-yws-radio/ http://revver.com/watch/1576853 Ad #12 YWS Radio Snoink and Grif Snoink and Grif Thanks to YWS! Thanks to YWS! ad blog blogtalkradio grif snoink talk radio young writers yws nonadult http://creativecommons.org/licenses/by-nc-nd/2.5/ Grif's Ad for YWS Radio Thu, 02 Apr 2009 03:52:40 -0800

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Grif does an ad for YWS Radio, monster truck style.

]]> adadvertgrifgriffinkeepermonster truckradioyws http://revver.com/video/1570329/grifs-ad-for-yws-radio/ http://revver.com/watch/1570329 Grif's Ad for YWS Radio Grif does an ad for YWS Radio, monster truck style. Grif does an ad for YWS Radio, monster truck style. Grif ftw. Grif ftw. ad advert grif griffinkeeper monster truck radio yws nonadult http://creativecommons.org/licenses/by-nc-nd/2.5/ Critique of "My First Inspiration" Wed, 04 Feb 2009 17:16:40 -0800

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Snoink critiques moonlit mystery's poem, "My First Inspiration." See original poem on YWS at http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic42874.html

]]> critiquemoonlit mysterymy first inspirationpoempoetrysnoinkwritingyoung writersyws http://revver.com/video/1470750/critique-of-my-first-inspiration/ http://revver.com/watch/1470750 Critique of "My First Inspiration" Snoink critiques moonlit mystery's poem, "My First Inspiration." See original poem on YWS at http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic42874.html Snoink critiques moonlit mystery's poem, "My First Inspiration." See original poem on YWS at http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic42874.html Thanks to moonlit mystery and YWS! Thanks to moonlit mystery and YWS! critique moonlit mystery my first inspiration poem poetry snoink writing young writers yws nonadult http://creativecommons.org/licenses/by-nc-nd/2.5/ Critique of "Unobserved" Sun, 11 Jan 2009 20:31:54 -0800

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Critique of clueless's poem, "Unobserved." Read original poem on YWS at http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic34178.html

]]> cluelesscritiquehow-tomagic ponypoempoetrysnoinkwritingyoung writersyws http://revver.com/video/1433105/critique-of-unobserved/ http://revver.com/watch/1433105 Critique of "Unobserved" Critique of clueless's poem, "Unobserved." Read original poem on YWS at http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic34178.html Critique of clueless's poem, "Unobserved." Read original poem on YWS at http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic34178.html Thanks to clueless and YWS! Thanks to clueless and YWS! clueless critique how-to magic pony poem poetry snoink writing young writers yws nonadult http://creativecommons.org/licenses/by-nc-nd/2.5/ How to Eat a Hostess Cupcake Sun, 11 Jan 2009 20:31:54 -0800

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Er... or at least this is how I do it. ^_^

]]> cream fillingcupcakefingershostess cupcakelickingsnoinksucking http://revver.com/video/1433554/how-to-eat-a-hostess-cupcake/ http://revver.com/watch/1433554 How to Eat a Hostess Cupcake Er... or at least this is how I do it. ^_^ Er... or at least this is how I do it. ^_^ Snoink Snoink cream filling cupcake fingers hostess cupcake licking snoink sucking nonadult http://creativecommons.org/licenses/by-nc-nd/2.5/ Critique of "Prelude to Despair pt1" Thu, 08 Jan 2009 16:31:52 -0800

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Critique of Demetri Saint Randrac's poem, "Prelude to Despair pt1." Read original poem on YWS at http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic41504.html

]]> critiquedemetri saint randracpoempoetrysnoinktutorialswritingyoung writersyws http://revver.com/video/1426682/critique-of-prelude-to-despair-pt1/ http://revver.com/watch/1426682 Critique of "Prelude to Despair pt1" Critique of Demetri Saint Randrac's poem, "Prelude to Despair pt1." Read original poem on YWS at http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic41504.html Critique of Demetri Saint Randrac's poem, "Prelude to Despair pt1." Read original poem on YWS at http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic41504.html Thanks to Demetri Saint Randrac and YWS! Thanks to Demetri Saint Randrac and YWS! critique demetri saint randrac poem poetry snoink tutorials writing young writers yws nonadult http://creativecommons.org/licenses/by-nc-nd/2.5/ Critique of "Carrion Death." Sun, 14 Dec 2008 08:33:21 -0800

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Critique of Tangent's poem, "Carrion Death." Read the original poem on YWS at http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic40105.html And yes... I have a cold in this video, thus the weird voice. xD

]]> critiquespenguinattackpoempoetrysnoinktangentyoung writersyws http://revver.com/video/1379493/critique-of-carrion-death/ http://revver.com/watch/1379493 Critique of "Carrion Death." Critique of Tangent's poem, "Carrion Death." Read the original poem on YWS at http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic40105.html And yes... I have a cold in this video, thus the weird voice. xD Critique of Tangent's poem, "Carrion Death." Read the original poem on YWS at http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic40105.html And yes... I have a cold in this video, thus the weird voice. xD Thanks to Tangent! Thanks to Tangent! critiques penguinattack poem poetry snoink tangent young writers yws nonadult http://creativecommons.org/licenses/by-nc-nd/2.5/ Me + Jumping Position = EPICFAIL Tue, 09 Dec 2008 19:52:39 -0800

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No, seriously. It's kind of difficult to do for a beginner, apparently. Especially with someone as uncoordinated as I am. So, not only will you see me epic-fail, but you'll also see me epic-flail. The best of both worlds!

]]> horseback riding lessonsjumping position http://revver.com/video/1369356/me-jumping-position-epicfail/ http://revver.com/watch/1369356 Me + Jumping Position = EPICFAIL No, seriously. It's kind of difficult to do for a beginner, apparently. Especially with someone as uncoordinated as I am. So, not only will you see me epic-fail, but you'll also see me epic-flail. The best of both worlds! No, seriously. It's kind of difficult to do for a beginner, apparently. Especially with someone as uncoordinated as I am. So, not only will you see me epic-fail, but you'll also see me epic-flail. The best of both worlds! Thanks to Dad! Thanks to Dad! horseback riding lessons jumping position nonadult http://creativecommons.org/licenses/by-nc-nd/2.5/ Allison "walks" past. Tue, 09 Dec 2008 17:52:39 -0800

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Here, Allison walks past.

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This is Sara, walking.

]]> horseback riding lessons http://revver.com/video/1368071/stirrups-down/ http://revver.com/watch/1368071 Stirrups down! This is Sara, walking. This is Sara, walking. Thanks to Sara and Dad! Thanks to Sara and Dad! horseback riding lessons nonadult http://creativecommons.org/licenses/by-nc-nd/2.5/ Walking! Tue, 09 Dec 2008 11:31:46 -0800

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This is just me walking Ceniza. She's kind of being a brat here. XD Also, upon looking at the video, I have to tighten up the reins a bit. It's not quite right. Yay for beginning horseback riding lessons?

]]> cenizahorseback riding lessons http://revver.com/video/1368057/walking/ http://revver.com/watch/1368057 Walking! This is just me walking Ceniza. She's kind of being a brat here. XD Also, upon looking at the video, I have to tighten up the reins a bit. It's not quite right. Yay for beginning horseback riding lessons? This is just me walking Ceniza. She's kind of being a brat here. XD Also, upon looking at the video, I have to tighten up the reins a bit. It's not quite right. Yay for beginning horseback riding lessons? Thanks to Dad! Thanks to Dad! ceniza horseback riding lessons nonadult http://creativecommons.org/licenses/by-nc-nd/2.5/ Fixing up Ceniza's Reins Tue, 09 Dec 2008 10:52:40 -0800

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Okay, this was totally candid camera. I did not I was being captured on video. With that said, I accidentally completely screwed up Ceniza's reins and I had to fix it. By the time my dad, the video person, decided to record my mishaps, I was pretty much done. So yeah.

]]> cenizahorsesreinssaddling upsnoink http://revver.com/video/1368017/fixing-up-cenizas-reins/ http://revver.com/watch/1368017 Fixing up Ceniza's Reins Okay, this was totally candid camera. I did not I was being captured on video. With that said, I accidentally completely screwed up Ceniza's reins and I had to fix it. By the time my dad, the video person, decided to record my mishaps, I was pretty much done. So yeah. Okay, this was totally candid camera. I did not I was being captured on video. With that said, I accidentally completely screwed up Ceniza's reins and I had to fix it. By the time my dad, the video person, decided to record my mishaps, I was pretty much done. So yeah. Thanks to Dad! Thanks to Dad! ceniza horses reins saddling up snoink nonadult http://creativecommons.org/licenses/by-nc-nd/2.5/ Backing Up! Tue, 09 Dec 2008 10:52:40 -0800

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I don't know how to spell the horse's name, but here is Allison backing up the horse!

]]> backing uphorsehorseback riding lessons http://revver.com/video/1368028/backing-up/ http://revver.com/watch/1368028 Backing Up! I don't know how to spell the horse's name, but here is Allison backing up the horse! I don't know how to spell the horse's name, but here is Allison backing up the horse! Thanks to Allison and Dad! Thanks to Allison and Dad! backing up horse horseback riding lessons nonadult http://creativecommons.org/licenses/by-nc-nd/2.5/ Critique of "To Swallow a Swallow" Sun, 30 Nov 2008 00:33:30 -0800

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Snoink, Sgt Salt, and Griffinkeeper critique Suzanne's poem, "To Swallow a Swallow." Read original poem on YWS at http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic38777.html

]]> blowjobcritiquegrifgriffinkeeperpoempoetrysgt saltsnoinksuzanneswallowyoung writersyws http://revver.com/video/1349455/critique-of-to-swallow-a-swallow/ http://revver.com/watch/1349455 Critique of "To Swallow a Swallow" Snoink, Sgt Salt, and Griffinkeeper critique Suzanne's poem, "To Swallow a Swallow." Read original poem on YWS at http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic38777.html Snoink, Sgt Salt, and Griffinkeeper critique Suzanne's poem, "To Swallow a Swallow." Read original poem on YWS at http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic38777.html Thanks to Suzanne and to the critiquers, Griffinkeeper and Sgt Salt! Also thanks, to the Audubon Society! Thanks to Suzanne and to the critiquers, Griffinkeeper and Sgt Salt! Also thanks, to the Audubon Society! blowjob critique grif griffinkeeper poem poetry sgt salt snoink suzanne swallow young writers yws nonadult http://creativecommons.org/licenses/by-nc-nd/2.5/ Awesome Art Project Sun, 30 Nov 2008 00:33:30 -0800

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Rube Goldberg machine, made as a final art project. It wasn't very... well, you'll see!

]]> army menartblockscarsdominoslincoln logslmcmarblespaintrube goldberg http://revver.com/video/1349766/awesome-art-project/ http://revver.com/watch/1349766 Awesome Art Project Rube Goldberg machine, made as a final art project. It wasn't very... well, you'll see! Rube Goldberg machine, made as a final art project. It wasn't very... well, you'll see! Snoink Snoink army men art blocks cars dominos lincoln logs lmc marbles paint rube goldberg nonadult http://creativecommons.org/licenses/by-nc-nd/2.5/ Critique of "Kentucky Fried" Sat, 29 Nov 2008 21:49:36 -0800

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Critique (sorta) of Kylan's poem, "Kentucky Fried." Although... it also includes Snoink counting piggy banks and getting words confused with each other and Sgt Salt laughing at Snoink. Oh, and really white Californian girls reading something that is obviously supposed to be read with a southern drawl. Oops! XD Read original poem on YWS at http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic39280.html

]]> critiquedr suesskylanpiggy banksploughpoempoetrysgt saltsnoinkyoung writersyws http://revver.com/video/1348436/critique-of-kentucky-fried/ http://revver.com/watch/1348436 Critique of "Kentucky Fried" Critique (sorta) of Kylan's poem, "Kentucky Fried." Although... it also includes Snoink counting piggy banks and getting words confused with each other and Sgt Salt laughing at Snoink. Oh, and really white Californian girls reading something that is obviously supposed to be read with a southern drawl. Oops! XD Read original poem on YWS at http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic39280.html Critique (sorta) of Kylan's poem, "Kentucky Fried." Although... it also includes Snoink counting piggy banks and getting words confused with each other and Sgt Salt laughing at Snoink. Oh, and really white Californian girls reading something that is obviously supposed to be read with a southern drawl. Oops! XD Read original poem on YWS at http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic39280.html Thanks to Kylan and Sgt Salt! Thanks to Kylan and Sgt Salt! critique dr suess kylan piggy banks plough poem poetry sgt salt snoink young writers yws nonadult http://creativecommons.org/licenses/by-nc-nd/2.5/ Critique of "Him" Sat, 29 Nov 2008 21:49:36 -0800

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Duration: 790

Snoink and Sgt Salt critique Shadow Charlatan's poem, "Him." Read original poem on YWS at http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic39326.html

]]> critiquepoempoetrysgt saltshadow charlatansnoinkyoung writeryws http://revver.com/video/1348466/critique-of-him/ http://revver.com/watch/1348466 Critique of "Him" Snoink and Sgt Salt critique Shadow Charlatan's poem, "Him." Read original poem on YWS at http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic39326.html Snoink and Sgt Salt critique Shadow Charlatan's poem, "Him." Read original poem on YWS at http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic39326.html Thanks to Shadow Charlatan and Sgt Salt! Thanks to Shadow Charlatan and Sgt Salt! critique poem poetry sgt salt shadow charlatan snoink young writer yws nonadult http://creativecommons.org/licenses/by-nc-nd/2.5/ Critique of "...Past" Sat, 29 Nov 2008 00:33:20 -0800

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Critique of Gadi.'s poem "...Past." Critiqued by Snoink and Sgt Salt. See original poem on YWS at http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic39312.html

]]> critiquegadi.poempoetrysgt saltsnoinkyoung writersyws http://revver.com/video/1348390/critique-of-past/ http://revver.com/watch/1348390 Critique of "...Past" Critique of Gadi.'s poem "...Past." Critiqued by Snoink and Sgt Salt. See original poem on YWS at http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic39312.html Critique of Gadi.'s poem "...Past." Critiqued by Snoink and Sgt Salt. See original poem on YWS at http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic39312.html Thanks to Gadi. and Sgt Salt! Thanks to Gadi. and Sgt Salt! critique gadi. poem poetry sgt salt snoink young writers yws nonadult http://creativecommons.org/licenses/by-nc-nd/2.5/ Critique of "Suicide" Sat, 29 Nov 2008 00:33:20 -0800

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Critique of spike71294's poem, "Suicide," performed by Snoink and Sgt. Salt. See original poem on YWS at http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic39332.html

]]> poempoetrysgt saltsnoinkspike71294writingyoung writersyws http://revver.com/video/1348226/critique-of-suicide/ http://revver.com/watch/1348226 Critique of "Suicide" Critique of spike71294's poem, "Suicide," performed by Snoink and Sgt. Salt. See original poem on YWS at http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic39332.html Critique of spike71294's poem, "Suicide," performed by Snoink and Sgt. Salt. See original poem on YWS at http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic39332.html Thanks to spike71294 and Sgt Salt! Thanks to spike71294 and Sgt Salt! poem poetry sgt salt snoink spike71294 writing young writers yws nonadult http://creativecommons.org/licenses/by-nc-nd/2.5/ Critique of "Wich one do you like better." Sat, 29 Nov 2008 00:33:20 -0800

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Added: Sat, 29 Nov 2008 00:33:20 -0800
Duration: 330

Critique of jcloud14's poem, "Wich one do you like better." Performed by Snoink and Sgt Salt. And... um... yeah, it's kind of silly, so just be warned, but there might be some good advice in there somewhere. XD Read original poem on YWS at http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic39304.html

]]> jcloud14poempoetrysgt saltsnoinkwritingyoung writersyws http://revver.com/video/1348237/critique-of-wich-one-do-you-like-better/ http://revver.com/watch/1348237 Critique of "Wich one do you like better." Critique of jcloud14's poem, "Wich one do you like better." Performed by Snoink and Sgt Salt. And... um... yeah, it's kind of silly, so just be warned, but there might be some good advice in there somewhere. XD Read original poem on YWS at http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic39304.html Critique of jcloud14's poem, "Wich one do you like better." Performed by Snoink and Sgt Salt. And... um... yeah, it's kind of silly, so just be warned, but there might be some good advice in there somewhere. XD Read original poem on YWS at http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic39304.html Thanks to jcloud14 and Sgt Salt! Thanks to jcloud14 and Sgt Salt! jcloud14 poem poetry sgt salt snoink writing young writers yws nonadult http://creativecommons.org/licenses/by-nc-nd/2.5/ Critique of "Wars" Sat, 29 Nov 2008 00:33:20 -0800

Author: Snoink
Added: Sat, 29 Nov 2008 00:33:20 -0800
Duration: 320

Critique of drama queen's poem, "Wars," performed by Snoink and Sgt Salt. See original poem on YWS at http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic39366.html

]]> critiquedrama queenpoempoetrysgt saltsnoinkyoung writersyws http://revver.com/video/1348303/critique-of-wars/ http://revver.com/watch/1348303 Critique of "Wars" Critique of drama queen's poem, "Wars," performed by Snoink and Sgt Salt. See original poem on YWS at http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic39366.html Critique of drama queen's poem, "Wars," performed by Snoink and Sgt Salt. See original poem on YWS at http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic39366.html Thanks to drama queen and Sgt Salt! Thanks to drama queen and Sgt Salt! critique drama queen poem poetry sgt salt snoink young writers yws nonadult http://creativecommons.org/licenses/by-nc-nd/2.5/ A Prank Call? Sat, 22 Nov 2008 21:52:36 -0800

Author: Snoink
Added: Sat, 22 Nov 2008 21:52:36 -0800
Duration: 79

Okay... who did this? XD

]]> pigsprank callsnoinksue http://revver.com/video/1335330/a-prank-call/ http://revver.com/watch/1335330 A Prank Call? Okay... who did this? XD Okay... who did this? XD Snoink Snoink pigs prank call snoink sue nonadult http://creativecommons.org/licenses/by-nc-nd/2.5/ Critique of "Hold Me!" Wed, 19 Nov 2008 14:49:48 -0800

Author: Snoink
Added: Wed, 19 Nov 2008 14:49:48 -0800
Duration: 383

Snoink critiques tay_star92's poem, "Hold Me!" See original poem on YWS at http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic38673.html

]]> critiquepoempoetrysnoinktay_star92young writersyws http://revver.com/video/1327721/critique-of-hold-me/ http://revver.com/watch/1327721 Critique of "Hold Me!" Snoink critiques tay_star92's poem, "Hold Me!" See original poem on YWS at http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic38673.html Snoink critiques tay_star92's poem, "Hold Me!" See original poem on YWS at http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic38673.html Thanks to tay_star92 and YWS! Thanks to tay_star92 and YWS! critique poem poetry snoink tay_star92 young writers yws nonadult http://creativecommons.org/licenses/by-nc-nd/2.5/ Critique of "Rage the Day" Tue, 11 Nov 2008 09:54:58 -0800

Author: Snoink
Added: Tue, 11 Nov 2008 09:54:58 -0800
Duration: 397

Snoink and Grif critique The Henry's poem, "Rage the Day." See original poem on YWS at http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic38481.html

]]> grifgriffinkeeperpoempoetrysnoinkthe henryyoung writersyws http://revver.com/video/1310492/critique-of-rage-the-day/ http://revver.com/watch/1310492 Critique of "Rage the Day" Snoink and Grif critique The Henry's poem, "Rage the Day." See original poem on YWS at http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic38481.html Snoink and Grif critique The Henry's poem, "Rage the Day." See original poem on YWS at http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic38481.html Thanks to The Henry and YWS! Thanks to The Henry and YWS! grif griffinkeeper poem poetry snoink the henry young writers yws nonadult http://creativecommons.org/licenses/by-nc-nd/2.5/ Grif and Snoink's YWS 4th Birthday Greeting! Mon, 10 Nov 2008 09:33:53 -0800

Author: Snoink
Added: Mon, 10 Nov 2008 09:33:53 -0800
Duration: 241

Yeah... Grif makes up a madlib. You imagine the rest...

]]> grifgriffinkeepermadlibnatesnoinkyws http://revver.com/video/1308736/grif-and-snoinks-yws-4th-birthday-greeting/ http://revver.com/watch/1308736 Grif and Snoink's YWS 4th Birthday Greeting! Yeah... Grif makes up a madlib. You imagine the rest... Yeah... Grif makes up a madlib. You imagine the rest... Thanks to YWS! Thanks to YWS! grif griffinkeeper madlib nate snoink yws nonadult http://creativecommons.org/licenses/by-nc-nd/2.5/ Critique of "Midnight" Mon, 10 Nov 2008 09:33:53 -0800

Author: Snoink
Added: Mon, 10 Nov 2008 09:33:53 -0800
Duration: 864

Griffinkeeper and Snoink critique Arashi's poem, "Midnight." Read original poem on YWS at http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic38475.html

]]> arashigrifgriffinkeeperpoempoetrysnoinkyoung writersyws http://revver.com/video/1308788/critique-of-midnight/ http://revver.com/watch/1308788 Critique of "Midnight" Griffinkeeper and Snoink critique Arashi's poem, "Midnight." Read original poem on YWS at http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic38475.html Griffinkeeper and Snoink critique Arashi's poem, "Midnight." Read original poem on YWS at http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic38475.html Thanks to Arashi and YWS! Thanks to Arashi and YWS! arashi grif griffinkeeper poem poetry snoink young writers yws nonadult http://creativecommons.org/licenses/by-nc-nd/2.5/ Critique of "the princess and the drunk" Sat, 08 Nov 2008 23:54:51 -0800

Author: Snoink
Added: Sat, 08 Nov 2008 23:54:51 -0800
Duration: 438

Critique of titorelli's story, "the princess and the drunk." Read original story on YWS at http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic38432.html

]]> critiquesnoinkstorytitorelliwritingyoung writersyws http://revver.com/video/1307206/critique-of-the-princess-and-the-drunk/ http://revver.com/watch/1307206 Critique of "the princess and the drunk" Critique of titorelli's story, "the princess and the drunk." Read original story on YWS at http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic38432.html Critique of titorelli's story, "the princess and the drunk." Read original story on YWS at http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic38432.html Thanks to titorelli and YWS! Thanks to titorelli and YWS! critique snoink story titorelli writing young writers yws nonadult http://creativecommons.org/licenses/by-nc-nd/2.5/ Critique of "Your pain" Tue, 04 Nov 2008 12:48:28 -0800

Author: Snoink
Added: Tue, 04 Nov 2008 12:48:28 -0800
Duration: 642

Critique of Moonglowe's poem, "Your pain." Read original poem on YWS at http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic38207.html

]]> critiquemoonglowepoempoetrysnoinkwritingyoungyoung writers societyyws http://revver.com/video/1297673/critique-of-your-pain/ http://revver.com/watch/1297673 Critique of "Your pain" Critique of Moonglowe's poem, "Your pain." Read original poem on YWS at http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic38207.html Critique of Moonglowe's poem, "Your pain." Read original poem on YWS at http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic38207.html Thanks to Moonglowe and YWS! Thanks to Moonglowe and YWS! critique moonglowe poem poetry snoink writing young young writers society yws nonadult http://creativecommons.org/licenses/by-nc-nd/2.5/ Critique of "My Family" Tue, 04 Nov 2008 12:48:28 -0800

Author: Snoink
Added: Tue, 04 Nov 2008 12:48:28 -0800
Duration: 532

Critique of HTML_dood's poem, "My Family." Read original poem on YWS at http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic38215.html

]]> html_doodpoempoetrysnoinkwritingyoung writersyws http://revver.com/video/1297706/critique-of-my-family/ http://revver.com/watch/1297706 Critique of "My Family" Critique of HTML_dood's poem, "My Family." Read original poem on YWS at http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic38215.html Critique of HTML_dood's poem, "My Family." Read original poem on YWS at http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic38215.html Thanks to HTML_dood and YWS! Thanks to HTML_dood and YWS! html_dood poem poetry snoink writing young writers yws nonadult http://creativecommons.org/licenses/by-nc-nd/2.5/ Critique of "Un-named" Tue, 04 Nov 2008 12:48:28 -0800

Author: Snoink
Added: Tue, 04 Nov 2008 12:48:28 -0800
Duration: 779

Critique of lakegirls's poem, "Un-named." Though it might have a real title when she figures out what's trying to eat the narrator in her poem. ;) Read original poem on YWS at http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic38161.html

]]> critiquelakegirlspoempoetrysnoinkwritingyoung writeryws http://revver.com/video/1297761/critique-of-un-named/ http://revver.com/watch/1297761 Critique of "Un-named" Critique of lakegirls's poem, "Un-named." Though it might have a real title when she figures out what's trying to eat the narrator in her poem. ;) Read original poem on YWS at http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic38161.html Critique of lakegirls's poem, "Un-named." Though it might have a real title when she figures out what's trying to eat the narrator in her poem. ;) Read original poem on YWS at http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic38161.html Thanks to lakegirls and YWS! Thanks to lakegirls and YWS! critique lakegirls poem poetry snoink writing young writer yws nonadult http://creativecommons.org/licenses/by-nc-nd/2.5/ Ceniza trots! Tue, 04 Nov 2008 12:48:28 -0800

Author: Snoink
Added: Tue, 04 Nov 2008 12:48:28 -0800
Duration: 52

Or more precisely, Snoink makes Ceniza trot. A very bouncy ride! And yes... I am a beginner horseback rider, so I am totally not perfect.

]]> cenizaenglish saddlehorseback riding lessonhorsessnoink http://revver.com/video/1297772/ceniza-trots/ http://revver.com/watch/1297772 Ceniza trots! Or more precisely, Snoink makes Ceniza trot. A very bouncy ride! And yes... I am a beginner horseback rider, so I am totally not perfect. Or more precisely, Snoink makes Ceniza trot. A very bouncy ride! And yes... I am a beginner horseback rider, so I am totally not perfect. Thanks to Ceniza and my instructor! Thanks to Ceniza and my instructor! ceniza english saddle horseback riding lesson horses snoink nonadult http://creativecommons.org/licenses/by-nc-nd/2.5/ Critique of "When you smile" Tue, 04 Nov 2008 12:48:28 -0800

Author: Snoink
Added: Tue, 04 Nov 2008 12:48:28 -0800
Duration: 622

A critique of CrisCaraway's poem, "When you smile." See original poem on YWS at http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic37820.html

]]> criscarawaycritiquepoempoetrysnoinkwritingyoung writeryws http://revver.com/video/1297849/critique-of-when-you-smile/ http://revver.com/watch/1297849 Critique of "When you smile" A critique of CrisCaraway's poem, "When you smile." See original poem on YWS at http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic37820.html A critique of CrisCaraway's poem, "When you smile." See original poem on YWS at http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic37820.html Thanks to Cris Caraway and YWS! Thanks to Cris Caraway and YWS! criscaraway critique poem poetry snoink writing young writer yws nonadult http://creativecommons.org/licenses/by-nc-nd/2.5/ It's a bridge, Ceniza, a bridge! Mon, 03 Nov 2008 12:05:32 -0800

Author: Snoink
Added: Mon, 03 Nov 2008 12:05:32 -0800
Duration: 33

Before this, Ceniza (the horse) was terrified of going over the bridge. Apparently, she had never gone on a bridge before. In any case, after we pretty much forced her over, I got her to walk over the bridge... again! She's an awesome horse. :)

]]> bridgecenizahorsehorseback ridingsnoinktraining http://revver.com/video/1295554/its-a-bridge-ceniza-a-bridge/ http://revver.com/watch/1295554 It's a bridge, Ceniza, a bridge! Before this, Ceniza (the horse) was terrified of going over the bridge. Apparently, she had never gone on a bridge before. In any case, after we pretty much forced her over, I got her to walk over the bridge... again! She's an awesome horse. :) Before this, Ceniza (the horse) was terrified of going over the bridge. Apparently, she had never gone on a bridge before. In any case, after we pretty much forced her over, I got her to walk over the bridge... again! She's an awesome horse. :) Thanks to S. and Dad! Thanks to S. and Dad! bridge ceniza horse horseback riding snoink training nonadult http://creativecommons.org/licenses/by-nc-nd/2.5/ Critique of "Titleless Story" Fri, 31 Oct 2008 08:36:32 -0800

Author: Snoink
Added: Fri, 31 Oct 2008 08:36:32 -0800
Duration: 1190

Critique of springrain2693's story, "Titleless Story." Though really, a better title for it would be "Snapshots in a Big City" or something else. Read the story on YWS at: http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic37568.html

]]> critiqueshort storysnoinkspringrain2693writingyws http://revver.com/video/1290194/critique-of-titleless-story/ http://revver.com/watch/1290194 Critique of "Titleless Story" Critique of springrain2693's story, "Titleless Story." Though really, a better title for it would be "Snapshots in a Big City" or something else. Read the story on YWS at: http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic37568.html Critique of springrain2693's story, "Titleless Story." Though really, a better title for it would be "Snapshots in a Big City" or something else. Read the story on YWS at: http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic37568.html Thanks to springrain2693 and YWS! Thanks to springrain2693 and YWS! critique short story snoink springrain2693 writing yws nonadult http://creativecommons.org/licenses/by-nc-nd/2.5/ Critique of "A Teenager's Question" Thu, 30 Oct 2008 10:55:29 -0800

Author: Snoink
Added: Thu, 30 Oct 2008 10:55:29 -0800
Duration: 496

Critique of thevoiceinside's poem, "A Teenager's Question." Read the poem on YWS at http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic37903.html

]]> critiquespoemspoetrysnoinkthevoiceinsidewritingyws http://revver.com/video/1288236/critique-of-a-teenagers-question/ http://revver.com/watch/1288236 Critique of "A Teenager's Question" Critique of thevoiceinside's poem, "A Teenager's Question." Read the poem on YWS at http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic37903.html Critique of thevoiceinside's poem, "A Teenager's Question." Read the poem on YWS at http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic37903.html Thanks to thevoiceinside and YWS! Thanks to thevoiceinside and YWS! critiques poems poetry snoink thevoiceinside writing yws nonadult http://creativecommons.org/licenses/by-nc-nd/2.5/ Critique on "How Could You?" Thu, 30 Oct 2008 10:55:29 -0800

Author: Snoink
Added: Thu, 30 Oct 2008 10:55:29 -0800
Duration: 341

Critique of Teddybear22's poem, "How Could You?" Read the poem on YWS at http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic37968.html

]]> critiquespoemspoetrysnoinkteddybear22writingyws http://revver.com/video/1288249/critique-on-how-could-you/ http://revver.com/watch/1288249 Critique on "How Could You?" Critique of Teddybear22's poem, "How Could You?" Read the poem on YWS at http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic37968.html Critique of Teddybear22's poem, "How Could You?" Read the poem on YWS at http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic37968.html Thanks to Teddybear22 and YWS! Thanks to Teddybear22 and YWS! critiques poems poetry snoink teddybear22 writing yws nonadult http://creativecommons.org/licenses/by-nc-nd/2.5/ Critique on "Obsession" Thu, 30 Oct 2008 04:36:08 -0800

Author: Snoink
Added: Thu, 30 Oct 2008 04:36:08 -0800
Duration: 522

A critique on Animlovegalore's poem, "Obsession." Read it on YWS at http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic35511.html

]]> andimlovegalorecritiquepoempoetrysnoinkwritingyws http://revver.com/video/1288201/critique-on-obsession/ http://revver.com/watch/1288201 Critique on "Obsession" A critique on Animlovegalore's poem, "Obsession." Read it on YWS at http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic35511.html A critique on Animlovegalore's poem, "Obsession." Read it on YWS at http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic35511.html Thanks to andimlovegalore and YWS! Thanks to andimlovegalore and YWS! andimlovegalore critique poem poetry snoink writing yws nonadult http://creativecommons.org/licenses/by-nc-nd/2.5/ Critique of "What a day" Sun, 26 Oct 2008 09:34:11 -0800

Author: Snoink
Added: Sun, 26 Oct 2008 09:34:11 -0800
Duration: 559

Critique of syd552's "What a day." Read the poem on YWS at http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic37841.html

]]> critiquespoemspoetrysnoinksyd552writingyws http://revver.com/video/1279816/critique-of-what-a-day/ http://revver.com/watch/1279816 Critique of "What a day" Critique of syd552's "What a day." Read the poem on YWS at http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic37841.html Critique of syd552's "What a day." Read the poem on YWS at http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic37841.html Thanks to syd552 and YWS! Thanks to syd552 and YWS! critiques poems poetry snoink syd552 writing yws nonadult http://creativecommons.org/licenses/by-nc-nd/2.5/ Critique on "My Inconvenient Truth" Sun, 26 Oct 2008 09:34:11 -0800

Author: Snoink
Added: Sun, 26 Oct 2008 09:34:11 -0800
Duration: 571

Critique on "My Inconvenient Truth" by NinjaRebel. Read the poem on YWS at http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic37698.html

]]> critiquesninjarebelpoemspoetrysnoinkwritingyws http://revver.com/video/1279823/critique-on-my-inconvenient-truth/ http://revver.com/watch/1279823 Critique on "My Inconvenient Truth" Critique on "My Inconvenient Truth" by NinjaRebel. Read the poem on YWS at http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic37698.html Critique on "My Inconvenient Truth" by NinjaRebel. Read the poem on YWS at http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic37698.html Thanks to NinjaRebel and YWS! Thanks to NinjaRebel and YWS! critiques ninjarebel poems poetry snoink writing yws nonadult http://creativecommons.org/licenses/by-nc-nd/2.5/ Critique of "On My Cinderella-Knees" Sun, 26 Oct 2008 09:34:11 -0800

Author: Snoink
Added: Sun, 26 Oct 2008 09:34:11 -0800
Duration: 571

A critique of Jasmine Hart's "On My Cinderella-Knees." Read original poem at http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic32927.html

]]> critiquejasmine hartpoempoetrysnoinkwritingyws http://revver.com/video/1279842/critique-of-on-my-cinderella-knees/ http://revver.com/watch/1279842 Critique of "On My Cinderella-Knees" A critique of Jasmine Hart's "On My Cinderella-Knees." Read original poem at http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic32927.html A critique of Jasmine Hart's "On My Cinderella-Knees." Read original poem at http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic32927.html Thanks to Jasmine Hart and YWS! Thanks to Jasmine Hart and YWS! critique jasmine hart poem poetry snoink writing yws nonadult http://creativecommons.org/licenses/by-nc-nd/2.5/ Critique #1 of "Poets Academy - chapter 1" Sun, 26 Oct 2008 09:34:11 -0800

Author: Snoink
Added: Sun, 26 Oct 2008 09:34:11 -0800
Duration: 590

Part one of a critique of AnonymousLight's "Poets Academy Chapter 1." Read original story at http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic37585.html

]]> anonymouslightcritiqueshort storysnoinkwritingyws http://revver.com/video/1279847/critique-1-of-poets-academy-chapter-1/ http://revver.com/watch/1279847 Critique #1 of "Poets Academy - chapter 1" Part one of a critique of AnonymousLight's "Poets Academy Chapter 1." Read original story at http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic37585.html Part one of a critique of AnonymousLight's "Poets Academy Chapter 1." Read original story at http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic37585.html Thanks to AnonymousLight and YWS! Thanks to AnonymousLight and YWS! anonymouslight critique short story snoink writing yws nonadult http://creativecommons.org/licenses/by-nc-nd/2.5/ Critique of "My Heart" Sun, 26 Oct 2008 06:55:04 -0800

Author: Snoink
Added: Sun, 26 Oct 2008 06:55:04 -0800
Duration: 378

Critique of "My Heart" by midnightsun10135. You can read the poem on YWS at http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic37786.html .

]]> critiquemidnightsun10135poemspoetrysnoinkyws http://revver.com/video/1279810/critique-of-my-heart/ http://revver.com/watch/1279810 Critique of "My Heart" Critique of "My Heart" by midnightsun10135. You can read the poem on YWS at http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic37786.html . Critique of "My Heart" by midnightsun10135. You can read the poem on YWS at http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic37786.html . Thanks to midnightsun10135 and YWS! Thanks to midnightsun10135 and YWS! critique midnightsun10135 poems poetry snoink yws nonadult http://creativecommons.org/licenses/by-nc-nd/2.5/ Critique of "I cant answer." Sat, 25 Oct 2008 19:34:02 -0800

Author: Snoink
Added: Sat, 25 Oct 2008 19:34:02 -0800
Duration: 437

Snoink critiques happybear's poem "I cant answer." See the original poem at: http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic36836.html

]]> critiqueshappybearpoemspoetrysnoinkwritingyws http://revver.com/video/1279048/critique-of-i-cant-answer/ http://revver.com/watch/1279048 Critique of "I cant answer." Snoink critiques happybear's poem "I cant answer." See the original poem at: http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic36836.html Snoink critiques happybear's poem "I cant answer." See the original poem at: http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic36836.html Thanks to happybear and YWS! Thanks to happybear and YWS! critiques happybear poems poetry snoink writing yws nonadult http://creativecommons.org/licenses/by-nc-nd/2.5/ Critique #2 of "Poets Academy - chapter 1" Sat, 25 Oct 2008 19:34:02 -0800

Author: Snoink
Added: Sat, 25 Oct 2008 19:34:02 -0800
Duration: 591

Part two of a critique of AnonymousLight's "Poets Academy Chapter 1." Read original story at http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic37585.html

]]> anonymouslightcritiqueshort storysnoinkwritingyws http://revver.com/video/1279071/critique-2-of-poets-academy-chapter-1/ http://revver.com/watch/1279071 Critique #2 of "Poets Academy - chapter 1" Part two of a critique of AnonymousLight's "Poets Academy Chapter 1." Read original story at http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic37585.html Part two of a critique of AnonymousLight's "Poets Academy Chapter 1." Read original story at http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic37585.html Thanks to AnonymousLight and YWS! Thanks to AnonymousLight and YWS! anonymouslight critique short story snoink writing yws nonadult http://creativecommons.org/licenses/by-nc-nd/2.5/